In a Private Garden
(in Southern Indiana
with Robert Bly, circa 1974.
I a graduate guest of Brescia College)
action squeezed
between subject and object
with less less less space
to move any argument
much less one’s heart,
he kicks butts
of people places things
trees are horses
stomping through the night
he throws languages around
like a mullah’s rug
rubs wood for heat
seizes the throne
of common sentence
becomes
an indigenous Norwegian
clansman with antlers
and the whole business
of bells and other rackets,
what he means is heartily prone
to the fuzz of swirl & twirl
& the squealing spin
of his iron Ferris wheel
built out of thin
air
with whole paragraphs
attached to the rim
whose grand gondolas
and loud rollers defy
gravity,
and then begins
his obscene view of looking
up skirts of long legged clouds
he sends boys to the woods
to slap mosquitoes and wrestle
with skinny words,
the girls (even nuns) he keeps
in the garden
his sense makes no sense
and when aliens land
all the world’s a mess
less less less obvious
as the gentle knight dissolves
and his protestant substance
gives this catholic school
its lesson
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I love all the action and the driven, pell-mell pace – very nicely done!
This is first rate, Jim. Haven’t read Bly in a long while, I’m now tempted to do so.
I knew Bly around the same time when I lived Minnesota. I participated in a reading with him. He was the star attraction and I was among a throng of student poets. He would use his hands animatedly lifting them every direction like birds taking off and landing. I literally thought he was going to take off! I look l learned much from him, so much of Spanish and Eastern European poets. Thanks for bringing him to up. He was a great influencer of his time.
that’s so cool Linda.
He seemed to have a thing for nuns and was doing 3 day workshops around various colleges of the Midwest. This was long before “Iron John” was a best seller. He was a wild-worded and talented man.
and oh yes
I remember his hands
conducting his own symphony,
he dressed up in African robes
and chanted,
once you meet him he wouldn’t rub off
!!!
ion to eon. literally epic..
Yes !
Fantastic portrait of the bard in his element. Not sure how his Iron John stuff holds up but his poetry from the 70s does. I’m jealous of you and Linda for having met him.
Now I have to catch up on Bly, but your poem gives him life to me in a way I find utterly compelling.
“Looking up skirts of long-legged clouds”?! I mean, COME ON. Fantastic…
The title really sets the tone–feels like a secret (private) knowledge shared with you. I read it several times–each time a new image leapt forward. Lovely, lovely poem.
Love this poem, Jim!
I get such a full picture of such an interesting person. A lot of the lines really floor me and the style of the description is something I really resonate with. Thanks!