In Some Ways, Men Can be Immortal
Hemingway claimed
every man has two deaths:
in the dirt, then in the minds —
I raise him a third:
my being amounts to five feet,
my things, likely a five by five room,
but my hair clings to combs, carpets, clothes,
my sloughed-off cells swirl in dust,
my sweat and spit stick
to grass blades and pillow cases,
bike chains and mug rims,
my nail indents sit in pins, pen caps, stress balls,
my blood resides in sink pipes,
my fingerprints linger
on table edges and book pages,
flower stems and light switches.
The heavens marked my departure,
nature nesting my ends and starts,
and as the earth holds me,
as you once held me and I held you,
I owe the earth my embrace;
though I may stay a skeleton under stones,
my name, a whisper in scant memories,
trust, Hemingway,
that my touch is tethered:
in dirt, minds, and indents —
I persist in echoes.
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Mmmm. I love the echoes you evoke here.
Glad you liked it!
I really enjoyed this. Your sentiment is echoed in a thimble that belonged to my grandmother- bent to the shape of her fingertip after decades of mending…… might have to write about that now. Thank you!
I’m happy to have inspired a poem! Thank you, and happy writing : )
This is amazing, Maira! This poem is so satisfying to read aloud with musical lines like “my sloughed-off cells swirl in dust” and “nature nesting my ends and starts.” I love this take on the “third death,” how impermanent lives endure through remnants and memory. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us!
I’m happy to have shared it (and thank you for the kind words)!
This is wonderful!
Aw, thank you so much!
Fantastic poem!
Many thanks!
Maira! Holy cow! I would quote back my favorite lines, but it would be most of the poem. Then that last line—get out of here!
That means so much coming from you — thank you!