In the Loop
1
Sometimes late at night
I think of that day at the coffeeshop
when I took your picture & you refused to smile.
It plays over & over in my mind in a loop,
a dog chasing its tail.
2
In middle school
the boys wore shirts with loops on the back.
The girls who were sweet on them
would sneak up behind & yank off the loops
as keepsakes, declarations of interest. My loops
remained in place.
3
Hula hoop, lasso, engagement ring, noose.
4
The planets move around the sun
in loops like a rubber band
stretched between my index finger
& thumb, elliptical.
5
You looped your arm
around mine, walked with me
a while, then
let me go.
6
My mother found crochet late in life,
her hook looping strands of yarn into sweaters
& sofa throws. She was making me a comforter
when she died. A friend of hers finished it,
closing the circle.
7
It was some dark matter
that drew us together, dark energy
that pushed us apart.
8
I make the same discoveries,
the same mistakes, over
& over again, a snake
swallowing its tail.
9
I’ve been happily single for years now
but when someone asks me out for coffee,
I say yes.
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feels like you’re turning the pages of my brain here..
great work. resolved,and printready.. (imo)
4) i’ve been studying up on the heliosphere lately.. if you’re unfamiliar- it might open some avenues to explore.. protecting itself from ‘space storms’ whatever that is/are…
Thanks so much, Dustin!
Did you see my comment on Jim Lally’s poem yesterday?
one hand makes the scoops
one hand holds the cone.
doublefisted big dicks.
in melting drippy bones.
I think #6’s my favorite, it’s hard to choose, but it resonates with me on a personal level. I love how many circles/loops get revealed in this. A life lived. It’s wonderful, Kevin.
I love your loop! A lot said with a little. I like that the first and last section point to imagined coupling.
This could be the opening or closing poem in a collection about geometric shapes, perhaps each accompanied by a photo, as in your haiku book.
Interesting idea, Gaby!
This poem opens and coses a loop beautifully.
Its loopy 🙂 in a good way 🙂
Beautifully done! Loved #6;
I would love to loop around for a coffee date with you.
Yes!
When I was more foolish I thought of time/experience as only being linear. I really enjoyed the cyclic nature of this, a well written loop indeed!
Thanks, Jeremy!
Excellent study
number 9
3 is my favorite, I like how it reads like, “I said what I said.” I also like how the poem loops and I still didn’t expect it!
Coffee soon!
Yes!
This is brilliant, Kevin!!!! I loved looping with you!
Thanks, LeTonia! I miss you!