In the Office of Vital Statistics
death is yellow
birth – white
marriage – green
divorce – blue
the first hour i wait
beneath an orange
crayon sign: A/C Out
as a line of Latina mothers
snake around the tables
to the white forms
inscripcion escolar
nacimiento no defuncion
next with bellies over belts
a boisterous crew of mates
shoving to get passports
for the bahamas
then bureaucratic lunch break,
when a warring couple shout
about nombre de soltera de la madre
a guard puts his hand
on his holster, sudden silence screams:
sweat waits soberly with us
now in front of me at the counter
a baby wiggles in a woman’s arms,
a grandmother’s custody case
but nobdy knows nombre del padre;
finally a black woman with patient eyes
and white tee with Change of Heart
looks my way
my name is called
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wow.
esp— sweat waits soberly.
great observation skills
You paint such a vivid picture and put us in line with you waiting our turn. Love – “sudden silence screams:/sweat waits soberly with us. Gorgeous.
Agree with all above…you captured a moment masterfully!
Your details are so well focused here. I like how you started with the paper colors to the orange sign.
Fine way to turn a tedious experience into art. I like the humanity that gleams from this poem.
I agree with Libby! You always give us so much humanity in your poems and we all “wait soberly” with you here. I love the tension, color, movement in this.
-A/C…out
The addition of Spanish lines interwoven set the scene just right!