In the Stillness
After last night’s storm,
after the crack and boom
of cold air rushing in
under the door of our stagnant
heat while the dogs whimpered
to be let in, after atmospheric
disturbance stirred up
our barometric passion
and surprised us with
an intensity of charged particles,
after the rush of rain
stampeded across the metal roof
and the thrust of wind
tore at all our postbellum joints,
after long minutes of a tender
uncertainy when we held together
in the swell of time
and after the coincidence of climax
when the darkling clouds
moved off to the east,
we rested in the stillness
and silence of distant lightning
8 thoughts on "In the Stillness"
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i can feel this silence… nice words
I really enjoyed this
Like the “after” anaphora.
Yes! It hit us too. Love how the tension builds, then silence
I love how this is one sentence, and cascades. The silence of distance lightening.
Mesmerizing. Love that voice. That tone.
As Melva says, the syntax creates such building, while the title lets us know that we’re going past the noise.
Lovely–the build up, the peak, the final serenity–the entire pacing of the poem. And words like “barometric” & “postbellum”–amazing.