Independence Day
Funny how no one calls it by its name.
Instead we say the Fourth of July & celebrate
on the Second & Third & the Fourth & the Fifth,
the fireworks starting early & ending late
as the neighborhood boys learn their first lessons
on how to wage careless little wars
with the enemy out of sight & out of mind.
No one warns them of collateral damage,
the poor cats & dogs running for cover under the bed.
How they shiver in those dusty foxholes,
how we wish we could tell them the bombs aren’t real,
not yet.
32 thoughts on "Independence Day"
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Very thought provoking, Kevin. I will rethink about this one for a hike. Thank you!
Especially like:
as the neighborhood boys learn their first lessons
on how to wage careless little wars
with the enemy out of sight.
No one warns them of collateral damage,
Thanks Bud!
“No one calls it by its name” carries a weight that reveals itself in the the last lines, and is so painfully true. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Rosemarie!
This is so well done, Kevin – a fresh look at something I simply looked at as wasteful and extravagant.
Thanks Nancy!
love the swift jump from cats and dogs to soldiers in foxholes
Thanks Gaby!
Wise man, you are.
Thanks Laverne! Or should I call you Yoda? 😏
Yes, the collateral damage done!
Unfortunately. How did Clancy handle it?
wow…
especially love:
“How they shiver in those dusty foxholes,/
how we wish we could tell them the bombs aren’t real,/
not yet.”
Thanks Pam!
Shew! (Borrowed from Shaun Turner). Another haunting poem. That first line and the last three!
Thanks Karen! You’re right about Shaun’s catchphrase—I’m stealing it too. 😏
I’m remembering how Eleanor hides under chairs, beds, tables etc when loud racket happens. Love the poem and thank you for including the animals.
I live to please you, Linda.
Ok – that’s a chill – not yet!
The mind does head in that direction sometimes these days, eh Alissa?
This poem hits hard—the way it turns the noise and excitement of the Fourth into something more complicated and real. The ending lands perfectly, with empathy for the animals and a quiet warning for us all.
Thanks Dana!
Whew!
“…as the neighborhood boys learn their first lessons”
and every line to follow, especially “No one warns them of collateral damage.”
Yep. Echo these sentiments.
Thanks Mary!
Incisive, artful, and just plain smart. Shew is right!
“as the neighborhood boys learn their first lessons
on how to wage careless little wars
with the enemy out of sight & out of mind.”
🔥
Thanks Shaun!
“how we wish”
so much. . .
This poem, evocative.
Thanks, Michele!
I relate to the sentiment!
Thanks Chelsie!
evocative, and nailed the ending
Thanks Mike!