infinite loops of life
you can view it as a way to make life less curt;
It’s only courteous you give yourself back to the earth,
you won’t know what you’re worth until you die and experience rebirth,
and anything beautiful is deserving of the hurt
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A very spiritual poem. Hopeful yet challenging at once. So much is said in just two couplets. Nice!
Love love love this line
“It’s only courteous you give yourself back to the earth,”
This poem is a recipe.
SAME. I love the word choice of “courteous” here. Specifically crafted, setting the tone here I think.
Death is courteous! I like the ABBA couplets.
love the musicality of your poems
I like the spiritual center of this poem, the wisdom. It shows that you have a soul that is curious and stirring.
I really like that description Linda!
Agree, there is an old soul at work here.