It’s always better on the outside
with the monarch butterflies rising like smoke and the young robins with their spotted chests still chirping for breakfast from mom and dad, the chipmunk flitting around the corner of the shed and the magnolia blooms preparing for launch, poison ivy snaking around the locust tree in broad daylight, snakes parting the tall grass in serpentine waves, everything out in the open, everything cooking under the morning sun, no hidden ingredients or preservatives, only now, here it is, take it or leave it, the breeze like honeysuckle, the shadows across the yard like well-oiled gears, ulterior a bullshit word, nothing and nowhere to hide, no chance for cosmic secrets, only iris blossoms on the fence line.
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Yes!
Lovely! Iris blossoms on the fence line.
Beautiful!
NIce!
I love the dense detail here. Yes to “only now, here it is, take it or leave it, the breeze like honeysuckle,”
” everything cooking under the morning sun”: Agree
Score! Excellent prose poem, Sean. And so true. The outdoors is truth in the raw. I might drop the word “cosmic” from the last line. (I just don’t think you need it.) Other than that, well done!
I think this one is my favorite so far.