it’s what i’m good at
A Post-Covid Journey Through Media
1: Bee and PuppyCat
some of us are born to be mothers
or born to be fathers,
others only to inhabit the shape of a monster,
wherein the cradle of our bodies
encages just a carcass of the kid we were
whilst the kid we are
wanders far outside the cradle bars, cloaked in vomit, poverty and stars.
at least
they can’t call us failures to launch;
since we do in fact walk the black of space,
be it with but a partial tank of gas and only change for
lunch, none for ourselves.
at least we earned that change
by being —- at something.
but we cannot call us
back to the spice of youth; we cannot
bake, we cannot wait, cannot make
ourselves,
cannot say
we’ve made
it.
god
what an embarrassment to pay your way there
in coins.
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The word choice, the form, and the flow. All superb. This was a great read.
thank you!
The internal rhyme is a spiral at times, creating twists and jackknives (of awesome).
What it does not do in counteract the theme. You weave it together well, so that the lines sing while the reader is bounced back and forth against them, like seagrass on waves!
I kind liked it, is my point 😉
thank you! your response is a poem in and of itself lol
Incredible crafting:
wherein the cradle of our bodies
encages just a carcass of the kid we were
whilst the kid we are
wanders far outside the cradle bars, cloaked in vomit, poverty and stars.