Jacques & Julia Make Mediterranean Fish Soup
Julia says, This is the kind of soup
you could make anywhere in the country,
even Kansas City.
Her voice is a flute, his a cello.
Jacques says, Even with salmon, right?
She calls him Jack.
Even hunched, her spine
curved like the fishbones in the stockpot,
she towers over him.
Proportions aren’t very important,
she says. That’s about half a big onion.
Here’s some garlic.
Jacques throws tomatoes in the pan.
It’s beginning to smell, Julia says,
like the streets of Marseille.
Julia says, You don’t have to have wine it.
Jacques, smiling & pouring from a bottle,
says I think you do.
But Jacques, gallant, mostly defers to her,
even though he’s doing the bulk of the work.
Julia is the legend, not him, not yet.
Jacques, judicious, ladies the stock.
I think put the whole thing in, Julia says, don’t you?
He says, I think you’re right.
Salt, pepper, thyme, tarragon, saffron,
not too much. You can always add more,
Julia says, but you can’t take it out.
Snapper, scallops, clams in the shell.
Mussels would be very nice, she says,
but there are none. Put in what you have.
Julia shows off a giant mortar & pestle
she & her husband found in a market in Paris
in 1949. Paul had to carry it a mile.
Ten years her senior,
Paul died years ago after a series of strokes.
Jacques looks a bit like him.
Jacques says, Shall we taste it?
Julia takes a delicate slurp, her eyes on him.
This, she says, is one of the best soups you can find.
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“ladies the stock” alone captures the relationship
Thanks Gaby!
Actually that’s a typo. It should be “ladles,” not “ladies.” Oy!
I love this poem–you capture this scene so well.
Thanks Shaun! It was an episode from the PBS cooking series they did together decades ago. I love watching them together.
Me too. It’s a favorite.
Oh !!!!! I can hear them so clearly!
Love love love love this !!!!!!
You should hear my Julia voice impersonation…
Way to capture this— I feel like I can see it. Particularly loved the curved fishbone spine description.
Thanks Chelsie! I think she had osteoporosis, hence the hunched back. She was still pretty tall.
I love how you sprinkle the conversation in! I love length of this. It’s like having a long conversation. Lighthearted and discerning. This one is a palate cleanser.
Thanks Linda!
“Proportions aren’t very important,
she says. That’s about half a big onion.
Here’s some garlic.”
Relatable beyond belief. I love how the conversation flows among the various elements of preparation.
I cook exactly like that! I rarely measure anything—except when I’m baking, which is a different kettle of fish.
Well I could both see AND hear this one!
Thanks, Arwen!
I stole two tomatoes behind a taverna on the French coast. The bartender/chef made me vegetable soup with white fish caught by Jackie O. When I spooned an eyeball in that first ladle, I realized the man had been watching me. Remembering how sweet the tomatoes were, I ate everything except scales and fins. When he asked me how I liked it, I said, It was just what I needed…”
Amazing story—Jackie O! I bet it was tasty, the eyeball notwithstanding.
Love the imagination behind this piece! And it made me feel hungry, so clearly your imagery is working well.
Thanks Ellen! I’m a big food guy, with seafood soups and gumbos high on my list.
How to enliven a narrative poem!
Not all that easy!
Thanks Pat!
gorgeous capturing of Julia and so fitting to use fishbones:
Even hunched, her spine
curved like the fishbones in the stockpot,
she towers over him.
love the dialogue woven in with the action, and the warmth between two greats while they do what they do best
Thanks Pam. By the way, the episode of their cooking show that I’m describing in the poem is on YouTube. They are fun to watch.
I’ll check it out!
Love this cooking scenario!
Thanks Linda!
What a delight this poem is. You set the scene so well. I could just hear their voices.
Thanks, Karen! It probably helps that both their voices are so famous.
I love this! I laughed out loud when he “says I think you do.” And then I had tears in my eyes toward the end. So emotional, such wonderful dialogue and imagery— you wove a perfect poem. And I so enjoyed the journey.
Thanks Michele! You’re my ideal reader. So glad it moved you.
A tasty poem!
You are SO speaking my language here friend. Great to read your work once again. I feel so lucky to experience this.
Thanks Jon!
The details are what make this poem — much like the ingredients in the soup.
Thanks Lee!
Her voice is a flute, his a cello!!! Wonderful images and characters
Thanks River.