Jamie and the Window
It started with a fly.
Fat, slow-moving,
buzzing just above the sofa cushion,
near the comfort-worn blankets
that shelter boys during long Minecraft afternoons.
It wasn’t meanness.
Jamie, ten,
sandal raised like a flag of justice,
swung hard
and cracked the world a little.
The living room window—
gone.
Glass spilled like rain
across the couch,
into corners,
and scattered across the cement driveway
like the sky had shattered
and tried to keep it quiet.
Connor, twelve,
stood beside him,
squinting at the damage.
“It’s hardly noticeable,” he said.
A pause.
“I think.”
They waited in the silence,
barefoot in the wreckage,
the house holding its breath
along with them.
Then—
the low sound of tires
on the driveway.
Their mother pulling in,
her hand still on the gear shift
when she saw it:
the bright, broken wound
in her home.
And Jamie let out a cry
from the center of his chest—
a sound that children make
only when they believe
they’ve let love down.
Later,
their father came home,
his shirt damp with the day,
his patience low and rattling.
He stood at the edge of it all—
the break,
the boys,
the unspoken weight—
and said nothing.
Because sometimes
a man’s quiet
carries more than any scolding.
That evening,
he pulled out the blue painter’s tape.
Crisscrossed it,
careful and taut,
until the jagged edges
wore a plaid of protection.
Not beautiful,
but faithful.
A barrier not just against weather,
but for the safety of bare feet,
little hands,
and four restless boys
still learning
how things fall apart.
Connor nodded,
arms crossed.
“Well,” he said,
“I guess we’re going for the plaid look now.”
And the room exhaled.
The glass man’s coming soon.
The light will return,
uncut and easy.
But tonight,
the house wears its wound with grace.
It flaps a little
when the air kicks in.
And I can’t help but think—
aren’t we all
just trying to hold our homes together
with what we’ve got on hand?
A strip of tape.
A breath of patience.
A brother’s voice
softening the edge.
Maybe the fix isn’t in the pane—
but in the sweep,
in the gathering,
in the moment you choose
not to shout,
but to stay.
Because sometimes
the best we can do
is cover the break gently,
make it safe
until love
can get through again.
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Great narrative flow here, and love the little details of personality and emotion, and “the house wears its wound with grace/It flaps a little”
Beautiful poem with great narrative. I love the details and you how gently lead up to the conclusion. I’m really enjoying your poems this year!
What a wonderful story, Dana! I love that you and your husband didn’t freak out, as mine would have. And the brother’s comment is priceless. He’ll make a great dad himself.
Thank you guys- true situation that presented this week. Humor and horror in the same space.
Great storytelling.
Love:
“swung hard/and cracked the world a little.” and wow!, wasn’t expecting this: “swung hard/and cracked the world a little.”
Great comment from a big brother: ““It’s hardly noticeable,” he said./A pause./“I think.”
and once again: “Connor nodded,/arms crossed./“Well,” he said,/“I guess we’re going for the plaid look now.”/And the room exhaled.
Great mom and dad points!
Love that last stanza!
oops, the surprise I didn’t expect was:
The living room window—/gone./Glass spilled like rain/across the couch,/into corners,….”
What a scene–and level of deep care. I love “sandal raised like a flag of justice,/swung hard/and cracked the world a little.” Glad the world was quickly mended. Love the release of “And the room exhaled.”
“Well,” he said, “I guess we’re going for the plaid look now.”
And the room exhaled.
(Love that Conner!)