Jazz Dirge in 5/4
Joey’s liver wrecked from whiskey & brew,
$219 a week & he can’t swing all of it.
We talk jazz & the blues, best Chicago
Deep Dish & I know it won’t be long.
If our past has its own scale it’s bebop
harmonic minor with a chromatic switch
at the end. I cheer when Hendrix pours
lighter fluid on his Strat but not Joey. He’s far gone
on Dizzy, Thelonious & Duke. I conjure
the funeral he’ll never be given, envision
spinning Miles for him—Bitch’s Brew
& Green in Blue. Vinyl scratches linger
on the top of a slow tune. He jabbers
about scent & taste & I sit with him like kin.
His sister’s anger interrupts like aquifer
under bedrock. I get why she turned on him—
his wild blood scorched her—but I’m not as close.
Pick me up a Rueben, a few smokes? he asks.
End stage liver failure means a few bites
a day. Hallucinations gather at his bed & he’s back
on the sax. There’s a woman & he’s cashing in
at 2 am. I offer a bite of a loaded baked potato
as Joey praises the hot melt of the butter,
the crumbly white meat, rough golden-brown
of the skin. He calls it dirty, sweet, gritty.
Eyes close a final time & he drifts out of his body
while Miles’ gleaming trumpet blares.
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jabber my jive
and
butter my knives!!
a yes! for me (obvs)
Wow, this is fantastic!
“Vinyl scratches linger” — sums up a life. So well told, Linda.
A beautiful and brave poem. Brave because you shared so much, not just of you, but of him and the journey that brought him to this end. Jazz is the backdrop, but really it goes much deeper than that. This is not a jazz poem; it’s a love poem. Well done, Linda.
Thank you, Lee. It’s about an old friend known since since I was a teen. Some people can take hold for a lifetime, no matter where their life ends up going.
I echo what Lee said.
This lands on its feet weeping for a beautiful troubled genius.
You write so well that we are allowed into your world in and around the touch parts.
Thank you
The stanzas are either 5 or 4 lined
Thanks for picking up on this! Not that I know much about timing but I tried to give it a nod.
🙂 nice touch
❤️❤️❤️❤️
Wonderful, Linda, as always. Your toughness is there too, along with the tenderness: nothing mawkish or sentimental here. Also the internal rhymes—given/envision, back/sax, cashing in/2 am—are lagniappes. Bittersweet music.
Love the musicality, the tenderness, and the respect.
Yes:
bebop
harmonic minor with a chromatic switch
at the end.
I love how you economize your storytelling here: “& I know it won’t be long.” tells us a lot and sets up the mood of the poem and then the line and detail carry and lift us.