Jittery and Grounded
People constantly recommend
I meditate
and it pisses me off.
When I close my eyes and concentrate
on just breathing,
inhale and exhale,
slow, deep draws of air
I start to wonder how many
countless, full-flavor, cigarettes
I’ve smoked.
How deep that oxygen is really getting.
Should my heart beat this fast
when the space around me
seems so quiet?
I’ll meditate myself
right on into a four am anxiety attack.
It ain’t that hard to do
with the way the world is.
The hippiest shit that works for me
personally
is digging my toes into the dirt.
Standing barefoot in a patch of moss
in a square of sunshine
filtered by maple leaves and oak.
And I breathe the best I can
and picture the roots reaching up,
wrapping me up, breaking ground
to meet me in the light.
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wonderful evocative ending
I love this! Meditation really doesn’t help me, either. I love the imagery in this! Nice write!
love: barefoot in a patch of moss
in a square of sunshine
filtered by maple leaves and oak.
and that powerful ending
Love soooo much of this, Misty.
That whole first stanza is gorgeous with internal rhyme and language
“Standing barefoot in a patch of moss” sounds like great meditation to me! The poet’s journey ends in beauty!
I love that, instead of meditating, the poem wills the roots to rise.
” I start to wonder how many countless, full-favor cigarettes I’ve smoked” I love this.
I have that same problem and that same preference, Misty. Must be ingrained into us by that mountain air!
Yeah, there’s no quieting the inner monologue for me either. A beautifully worded reminder to get outside ourselves, or at least outside. Thank you
As a dedicated but often reluctant, anxious meditator–this is delightful and spot on. Love it all, especially the ending lines:
Standing barefoot in a patch of moss
in a square of sunshine
filtered by maple leaves and oak.
And I breathe the best I can
and picture the roots reaching up,
wrapping me up, breaking ground
to meet me in the light.
Divine writing! I love this poem so much!
So relateable to those of us who can’t stop the stream of consciousness train while trying to center ourselves. I love that patch of moss!