June Forecast XVI. Today’s High: Three Feet
I spy a marvel of June— a fuzzy
young bumblebee on a bee balm’s
violet head in arabesque stance.
So round, yet she pliés up, spins
and swirls from tip to tip,
her yellow and black standing out
against dozens of purple blossoms
highlighted in June sun rays.
She dips-sips-leaps, dips-sips-leaps more,
before time to carry some
nourishment away— determined,
doing what needs to be done—
as we all do in this short life-dance.
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I envy your powers of description, Michele. You capture the movements of a bee, and the scene, so well. Love the last line, too.
Oh – this is simply scrumtious with images and sounds.
Love the ballerina metaphor and the bee!
Simply lovely!
Beautiful imagery, with so much action in this poem. I also love the ballerina metaphor on the violet bee balm.
You had me at bees and took me deeper with the comparison of our lives at the close. ❤️
You catch the movement of bee well!
Love: She dips-sips-leaps, dips-sips-leaps
Love the dance of her you carried us along with! 🙂
I love how you’ve captured the movement of the bee. Great movement of language and rhythm You’re closing line transcends us.