June, in Winter
*after the poem Lunchlady by Silas House
Dear Mr. House,
After Robert Hayden, you write,
I thanked her, but not enough, now or then.
The hot kitchen recipes
of those days linger like afternoon Commons.
Offering us food on the sly, Shepard’s pie
and lasagna. Many of the students never saw
her, auntie June, nor felt the firelight in her stare.
Never witnessed the pop of grease
at breakfast or the hot dark before auntie Shirley
flipped on the cool white of fluorescent lights.
Father Piltz had no rage or kept it hidden,
like the good dishes we dropped, splintered
and buried under the juice boxes and napkins.
Always ready to catch me by the pale bleached
collar yet leave his wife the reading quietly
and with concern, of the dove colored code written
on my face and arms; like yolky egg gone cold.
–My hands–
left them unscrubbed, to remain a stain. Forever
from the scape pit to the Hobart to the blue-silver
of the stainless steel shelves.
You write, I did not understand the moment.
Me too, Silas. Me too.
and Hayden, What did I know, what did I know
of love? Auntie June says, Here, have a brownie,
one ice cream sandwich.
Later, much later a tray comes through a door
the inmate in the cell next to mine whispers,
You are more a friend to me than I am to myself.
We’ve done our best, but what do we know?
We can only hope our best is good enough.
“Inverted” and still respectfully yours,
Coleman Davis
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Wow, Coleman!
love: the form used to contain the movement laced with connections
Adore: Offering us food on the sly
witnessed the pop of grease
like yolky egg gone cold
left them unscrubbed, to remain a stain.
And truth-speak: You are more a friend to me than I am to myself.
Thank you Pam. 😀
I loved yolky egg.
Friends to self is hard.
Me too, the egg was his and I got it in , this one was a challenge.
Thanks Manny 😊
You can feel the reverence. I love how tmyou built off House and Hayden with this piece.
Thanks Shaun. I love it that you said reverence. That’s the word I was looking for. Those high school kitchens were churches we just didn’t know it.
Thanks.
So warm and complex! Well done!
Thanks Bud. The Hayden piece is ” Those Winter Sundays” and it is phenomenal.
Beautiful poem, friend. It’s a window. And love “dove-colored code written / on my face and arms.” I’ll have to look up the House and Hayden pieces that you pay homage to.
Thank you bill, yeah memories doing memory thing. All.we can do is hang on for the ride. Thanks again.
The House piece (Lunchladys) just showed up in the mailbox and it sent me.
It’s in the latest Louisville Review.
The Hayden piece you probably know.
I love those reply lines: “Me too, Silas. Me too.” It’s a treat to see a piece in conversation with others. Nicely done, Coleman!
Not easy to convey how it hits for me and had to keep simplifying.
Thank you.
Wow to all of this! My favorite line is “. . .of the dove colored code written on my face and arms; like yolky egg gone cold.” Great write!
Thank you, for saying that about that line hardest one to get right in the whole poem. Someone told me show it works best and in this case I think it did.
That description, “yolky egg gone cold,” is absolutely chilling. I like so many things about this poem. I love you are also talking to Silas House and Robert Hayden. But most importantly you are honoring June.
Fantastic, Coleman! A wonderful collaboration with Silas and Hayden. You continue to amaze me.
A deeply resonant and intricately layered poem, Coleman! Kindness, however small, leaves an indelible mark.