Just Sit Down And Bleed
there’s this old typewriter, hidden
in a leather case, upstairs
at the wife’s mother’s house
when I leave it open, across
the bedroom during our visit
I imagine we type, late
at night on clacking keys, create
a susurrus of platen strikes
and ink swirls left on paper
by morning we wake, reading
words we don’t mean, anything
in particular
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Think it still needs work, but I’ve hit a wall. Suggestions welcome.
the title, boom really got me! really enjoyed the poem, and typewriters, well, they are awesome.
Words on typewriters, words in the night, words meant and not meant. I enjoyed what you have here.
I love “susurrus of platen strikes!”
I like poems of imagination, the fantasy of it all
love learning a new word–susurrus, enjoyed the poem