Key Lime Pie
I had never made a pie,
but this was the one
you always ordered.
I found a recipe,
and either walked or
biked to the store-
I only recall
hoping regular limes
would do the trick.
It did not quite
hang together,
and the color was off,
but oh that crust –
butter, graham crackers!
Prettily filling the Pyrex.
You drank too much
on your birthday
to give it a taste,
and the next night,
I was saving it for you
to try, to see I tried, but
he cut a jagged slice,
proclaimed it sour,
and tossed the whole thing.
I never knew
if you even recalled
that I made it.
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Everyone’s a critic, Tania. Some people are never the people we should go to for approval, ya know? I like this part “It did not quite hang together, and the color was off.”
Just the right balance of stanzas, 5 on the pie, 4 on the other; every word perfect and no extra words. I love it!
This long buried memory
comes alive in your retelling:
a memory better forgotten
but yet, unforgettable
Thanks everyone. This one was hard. Been in the back attic of my brain for a long time.