Killin’
If I could,
I’d cut
the sad
out of me,
hang it
upside down
tied
by its feet,
slice
its throat
from side to side
with a razor sharp butcher knife..
like my daddy did
to the hog he killed,
left hanging —
fresh stark white flesh
would purge
in the cold.
7 thoughts on "Killin’"
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carolyn, this is hauntingly beautiful. thank you for sharing.
the form! i see the hog hanging..
love when poems are visual in this way.
helps to add to the heavyness you’re trying to shed too.
nice work.
A vivid, memorable extended comparison..
I agree with Dustin, the image and form come together really effectively in this poem in a way I certainly related with.
Wow- gut punch beautiful.
powerful
rendering
of two
renderings
Thanks everyone of you. Your comments are spurring me on.