Laboring
I’m in a raw mood
where the full fridge
is empty and nothing
in the house will suffice
to whet the palate
there’s a peace
in this house
that’s gone sour
there’s not a road
or song to fix me
just complaints
rattled against the skull
impotent hands and mind
where I once could fix
by baking in the hot sun
while my father lay shingle
after shingle after shingle
like an artist
and at the end of the day
I would feel tired and sun sick
but satisfied
I throw words out
into this unreal place
and into people
without knowing
what to feel
so when the day ends
all I want
is a cold beer
and that woman
smelling good
because even though
I’m not losing my lunch
on a roof with blistered skin
bleeding hands and shaking legs
somehow, I’m still going through it
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I like the way you take us through your feelings, your dad’s feelings and somehow by the end it all makes sense.
The tension in the poem (full/empty, peace/sour) continues nicely. Your labor with words and their layering (like the shingle after shingle) contrasts and connects the two pictures. I think you’re a craftsman with words.