Landmines
Landmines
Growing up, when talking to my father, at the corner of every sentence it felt like there could be a landmine.
The trouble is, these landmines were so well hidden.
I might be walking around the house on a fine, sunny day when I’d utter something and observe my father’s cheek flushed with red, and I’d know that I did it.
I said it.
He was about to detonate.
His heavy hand would swing across my face.
I knew it.
I activated something unknown, hidden deep within him.
I stepped on that damn landmine again.
I survived it, though.
And through trial and error, I have learned which pathways were safer to walk.
Even though I am here now, without visible scars or missing body parts,
Still, pieces of me are forever lost.
No one survives a landmine entirely in one piece, just as no one survives war without a scar.
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I feel this. Parts if ne are forever lost too.
Thank you for reading my poem!
‘No one survives war without a scar’ was the perfect way to end this
Thank you, Philip!
Brutal reality in this poem. Bless your heart.
Thank you, Kevin!
Powerful. Your metaphor of a landmine makes this especially compelling. The line, “Still, pieces of me are forever lost,” is so strong. That line will stay with me for a while. . . .
I appreciate hearing that; thank you!
A powerful reminder that human beings go out of their way to create new tools, like landmines, to maim and kill, while the heavy hand has been doing damage from the beginning. Nice writing, Sanida.
Indeed, thank you so much, Laura, for reading my poem!