Lather, Rinse, Repeat
I always begin the day with a bowl
of redemption and a banana.
For a little while my mind is big
enough to contain emptiness.
Then lizards and snakes wake in
hidden glades from where they toss
toys and hand grenades that make
me angry before I even see why.
My objections condense to a
surly growl that follows me as I
chase my tail and flail at ghosts
inflaming my mind and find
at the end of the day’s race
I’m still in the starting block
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the sham-poo that starts the day ends it. really good meditation of running on life’s dog track.
I felt so much promise in that “redemption and banana.”
Yes, the redemption and banana hooked me – then real life took over.
Those first two lines are tremendous! A great juxtaposed hook.
love how the title nutshells the poem
Echo the great two opening lines – “redemption and a banana”! Come on!! Well traveled day translated into fun words with explosive undertones.
Echo appreciation of “redemption and banana.” Sonnet with an early volta!