LETTERS TO THE DEAD: SIX
LETTERS TO THE DEAD: SIX
6/6/2018
Dear Pat (1945 – 1968)
……………………………………..And there,
in immensity’s mire, I encountered their dead;
Dead grazing the barriers,
Dead opening roadways and doorways.
Pablo Neruda
it’s easy to love the dead
they don’t talk back
sometimes they whisper
in your ear and you’re never sure
if they mean do this or do that,
just last month jennifer’s physic
said you were coming through
= as if half-centuries are mere
stepping stones to yesterday
today i sit in a cafe reading blogs
titled LETTERS TO THE DEAD
(maybe you don’t know about our
profoundly nefarious web
but maybe, my brother,
you know everything).
and i watch across the street
where old men go in and come out
with drugs in crook-necked bags,
extending their lives into diminishment
how could you know
that your son (born a month after
you passed into a different plane)
would be a professor of russian history
or that our brother kevin would be queer
and die young from a virus called aids?
oh, the world of ’68
that explosion of who we would be
that reverberation that rings in old ears
that mix of personal and impersonal,
riots in the streets with you decked out
in the parlor of roth funeral home
the lines were long and afterward
dad went into the melancholy mode
of “the good die young”
you were his namesake for heaven’s sake
Pat, if you’ve been my guardian angel
you’ve certainly done a-hell-of-a-job;
with all my close calls, my boneheaded mistakes
i’ve come out better than i deserve
and do you believe (as i do) that these
online LETTERS TO THE DEAD
are really for the living, to justify ourselves
to our facebook followers?
still, i feel you and see you
in my dtreams or behind my writing tree
at the post office or the grocery
at the lot of our long-gone house,
not a shadow
but a quiet presence amid the hubbub
as always,
Jim
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Powerful and meaningful. Great great great work.
yes, i agree with HB… powerful and meaningful… as always beautiful writings…
“if you’ve been my guardian angel
you’ve certainly done a-hell-of-a-job”
What I especially like in this poem is the steady mixture of uncertainty about communicating with the beloved who are dead and the seeming certainty that at least writing to the dead has value.
These letters keep universal burdens and secrets. Thanks for the specific windowsill, Jim. They are good.
Jim, this is your most heartfelt one to date. Keep on…
This series is touching, reaching, powerful. I’ve enjoyed all of them. And will continue to enjoy. Thanks.
I have felt the presence of my dad around me ever since he died when I was fifteen – a long time. Your posts are haunting and meaningful to me.
“where old men go in and come out
with drugs in crook-necked bags,
extending their lives into diminishment”
Wow
Thanks for sharing about my brother. Sadly I don’t remember much. I had to stay drunk to cope. Someday, perhaps, I can revisit this time. For now I’m grateful for your insight.