Life and Death on a Suburban scale
The first pass to outline the property,
then the long rows, down and back,
down and back, covering the same ground
two steps over, slicing through whatever
stands in the way — grass leaf,
oak leaf, cigarette butt.
I know this patch of earth
better than anyone, having
followed the mower across
its every inch so many times:
the gentle hump
the blades will scalp,
how the dogwood’s soft bark
will yield to the edge
of the mower deck,
how furred magnolia pods disintegrate
with a satisfying chunk,
and that the purr of the engine
draws sharp-eyed finches to hunt
desperate moths
as they make a break
for the diminishing forest
of uncut grass.
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Such careful observations. Love it.
You’re so good
at bringing the reader
along with you.
I like the sounds of
hump
chunk
the purr of the engine,
& the diminishing forest
of uncut grass
I agree with Jim, you bring the reader along so beautifully! One thing about your poetry: it is so respectful of the reader. You rarely leave us high and dry digging for hidden meaning (although it’s usually there.) Thank for providing such a clear roadmap. I
bless all the little
grass-stained hearts.
love all this green!
This does a gorgeous job in bringing us with you to a specific time and place. Personal and universal and always compelling.
You’ve made the act of mowing into the art of poetry! Rings true to memories of cutting my folks’ little backyard years and years ago!
also love the fun title
I’m such a sucker for the minutiae. And you are so skilled at giving me exactly what I want. I appreciate too the way anthropomorphizing turns to recognize the desire of the moths. Deft touch.
I echo all of the above.
Your ability to take us with you is an incredible gift. Thank you for writing. And sharing.