Life on Mars?
Such a damn pitiful day for us,
roaming where we barely breathe at all,
where we launch to planets farming,
and maybe claim a country for our own
where on the caps, ice chokes all Ma’s roses blooming,
and pushes spiky tendrils up through the frost,
and wilded sweet weeds never waken to sing praises.
Bees make no honey for the children of the lost.
Yet, a moon of Phobos floating warmly up the colony’s
river branch slurried rich with farmed, flipping
minnows, leaping in Martian rust, an ochre glimmering glee, and,
in the ocean, green as sequoia needles at cathedral prayer it greets
the grey old women, firewood and clam shells tumble-armed,
with moon-scalloped cloudy pupils that remember
wolflike howling cosmonauts who desired them.
Look at those cavemen go, they said, licking their lips; shaking their hips.
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I like your use of language here. It’s tight, musical, a tad weird and mysterious. It’s so imaginative. How much work must have gone into writing it! Has all the intense, concentrated time you’ve spent translating this month affected your poetry? Very good, Manny!
I adore where your language has gone. It has economized in places, and expanded like fighting preying mantises on a Chinese junker going all out lucha libre. For me was a poem where I hungered to sop a meal with cornbread as you were writing the recipe, and describing the cook, so vivid Linda, and nothing like I’ve ever seen of yours it rang with so much gut and grit,
Thank you.
you make us (the reader) astronauts as a sailors in space… i can see them fighting in the dancehall
oh man!
Love the imaginative joy you’re having here. The end is hilarious.
I love those old women too
language both evocative and provocative
so that would make me a evocateur and a provocateur?
Magical and fun to read! What a wonderful mind you have!
an interesting place to go – I suggest taking a flashlight and a pack of batteries. buddies. bread crumbs. trained birds. or bats.
Great detail & imagery.
thank you kindly melva sue priddy.