Like Smooth Stones
vertigo
eye floaters
ear crickets
missing teeth
a left-footed limp
permanently pulled groin
hyper-active thyroid
words slippping away
on the stage coach going south
old age states of nature
you rub them like smooth stones
accept their limitations
keep them in the dark
for what can the young guess
about their existence
you imagine the next life
being without authority
it’s not that you do whatever you want
but whatever you need to
in a casual unhurried manner
like handing a bucket of well water
to the next person in line on the fire brigade
maybe it’s a library everyone is saving
each day will be wondrous
& will bring another drop of clarity
as slowly you slide into the habit
of just being a good guy
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I love it!
This makes me feel better about getting old! words slipping away/on a stage coach going south – funny.
Wish I’d written this one, love it. That image of the fire brigade bucket line, and “maybe it’s a library everyone is saving”, just shines.
What the three other commenters said. I loved it, too.
Yes. What they said and I really like the indentation. It is hesitant and simple like a pocket stone.
Lovely imagery and patient progression to the final stanza.