Linda’s Hair
The shovel leans against the garden wall.
This is where the tree canopy shade thins
out & the sanctuary buildings begin.
A short walk from the garden
across hot asphalt & the marbled
aggregate of the concrete walkway
to the main cabin is a nice cool
down & a thought tickles . None
of my tools are broken.
Today was a good day.
I climb the five worn steps to the long lanai
shade. It sits quiet here on the wood, my hard heels
wake the dogs & I kick the dust covered boots
over toward what is left of winter’s quartered logs.
Beauty has been getting ready for a trip
Beauty has been getting ready for a trip
to Lexington for business, leaving tonight.
As the door opens, the cacophony of porch
& fauna tumble noisily into the house.
Her towel draped head turns toward
the sound, brush & dryer in her hands.
A smile says it all & I walk to where she
sits, take the offered gleaming tools from her
hands. The towel unwinds simple one push
of the small button on the hairdryer to the left
& find the fit for my hand on the brush.
Three steps closer begins this,this more delicate work.
A slight shift by one of us & her shoulder touches my chest.
A slight shift by one of us & her shoulder touches my chest.
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Wow! You capture the intimacy of that moment so well. Even better to hear it in person today.
Thanks for coming Jay.
For the comment and the support 🙂
Such a tender moment so well rendered. Hats off to you.
I have kind of a neat muse😀
This is such a sweet moment to capture – thank you for sharing it
Thank you arwen 😀
reminds me of joni’s ‘big yellow taxi’ right before they pulled in them paving trucks…. great capture of a mood of a moment.
Love it !!!
Yup ain’t no pa ing trucks coming for our woods 🙂 lol
I loved seeing the word “cacophony”
I liked how you compared the exhausting work of the garden to the delicate work later in the poem
I love that you come in from the garden to the “sanctuary” and in that hallowed space, you brush hair. That delicate shift at the end says it all! You romantic man, you!
Three steps closer begins this,this more delicate work.
A slight shift by one of us & her shoulder touches my chest.
Love these last two line of tenderness.
So tender! I love this poem.