Living on Mt. Constitution, Washington State 1990
I learned to hold snakes that first summer
on the mountain. Not with stagecraft
or raving tongue, but with concentrated focus
like a tightropewalker holding a heron egg.
I’d find them, fragile silver-edged shoestrings,
alive & nonvenmous & dozing inside a door
sweep or wiggling on a fallen branch, a curled
leaf. I spoke to them like fresh puppies.
Hello sweetheart. What’s up little
green? Staying out of the heat,
my lovely slither bit?
Baby green snakes everywhere! They danced
on my zucchini, spiraled at the foot of my claw
foot tub. Dined on banana slugs & chili-bean
colored earthworms. I said, hell yes & I surrendered.
Hello, Sugaree. Don’t be afraid.
I’ll walk around you. My sweetness,
if I step on you. I didn’t mean it.
Oh, tender lessons of my preparative
days. Yes, yes, I remember them fondly. I learned
the snake kingdom will not devour me. Virtuous
garter, I grew to adore your sweet-keeled scales.
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another win for the snakes.. 🙂
nice work here.
I have not and probably will not write a love song to a Copperhead.
I was thinking as I read the poem, “Bet she doesn’t feel the same way about copperheads.” 😏
St. Francis would be so proud. Love the way you speak to the little slitherers, and how you bring us into your present in the last stanza.
They danced
on my zucchini, spiraled at the foot of my claw
foot tub.
Your poem’s tone reminds me of Audrey Wood’s tone toward creatures in one of my favorite books, Pish, Posh, Said Hieronymus Bosch
I think you’ve probably done more to rehab snakes for me in the last two days than about anything else in 35 years
Ha! My fondness is for the ones who do nice things for humans and aren’t poisonous. I’m terrified on copperheads. Thanks, Shaun!
I love all the physicality of the snakes and the mental work done by you!
Great poem all through, and love the ending
we have had generations
of snakes
living in our 1877 home
great lines all through:
Oh, generative lessons of my preparative
days.
We want more snake poems.
Yes, Linda, there are many great snakes in the world that do us a world of good. But I still jump when I see even a good one.