Lotus Ascends From Muck
Entombed in pyramids alongside chariots
& golden scarabs her round brown
seeds can wait a thousand
years to sprout. Cleopatra bathed
in her petals & Hindus insist Brahma,
the Creator, was born from her watery
chaos. At shallow riverside her stems
shoot through water & muck
as Lotus ascends, pristine
corolla bursting. Christians reach
for her light too, praise her strength
for growing eagerly in marshes, ponds
& flood plains – the triumph
of spirit over senses. Did you know
a lotus flower refuses to grow
in pure water? Muck is where
nutrients live & it’s still causing
a fuss, century through century. Lotus
blossoms scattered like christening
water on Ramses’ gleaming coffin, sprouting
from Buddha’s footprints. They say
Cleopatra doused the sails of her royal
ship in Lotus oil so Marc Antony could smell
her as he was approaching the shore.
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Yep, the muck is where the nutrients live. It’s true!
Yeah I liked that part too….love the ending. And we come back to Cleopatra
“her round brown/seeds can wait a thousand/
years to sprout. ”
Great sounds here.
Of course, the royal Queen Cleopatra must end the story!
Stunning in its scope, Linda. “Lotus // blossoms scattered like christening / water on Ramses’ gleaming coffin” is especially vivid for me, not to mention that muck.
we have yellow flag irises
in the shallow muck
of our pond
and this catches the very
nature of their fleeting beauty
bravo
No mud, no lotus.
No problems, no solutions.
No apparent discomforting ugly, no flowering beauty.
A world of truths.
You couched it in elegance. It was so beautiful.
So many gorgeous lines and details. I loved this poem and learned a lot about the lotus. I loved the ending with Cleopatra and “growing eagerly in marshes, ponds/& flood plains – the triumph”
mucklove.
A masterpiece, Linda! A stunner. Hope this one is in the book!
I chose a lotus tattoo over anything pink ribbonish after cancer for its muck-to-beauty symbolism. This was a musical and joyful read. Didn’t know that about Cleopatra!
I’ll save this one for little Bohdi, even though
Loved the images and story telling- so smooth!
What a fun, informative poem.
This is beautiful, Linda! I love how you intertwine different deities and religious images into one brilliant poem about beauty growing from muck.
Fun and mud and beauty.