Love Me Gentlefirm The Way Firemen Love A Treed Cat
Love me when I’m tired of life, when I feel like
anyone who loves me must be wrong,
when I tell you that you’re mistaken, that I’m a mistake.
Love me when I feel like I’m simultaneously a door with no handle
and the frightened thing that can’t find its way out.
Love me with your hands like I’m all the money
you can grab, with your mouth like it’s happy hour
—drinks half off—with your whole body which feels
like a river when I feel like a fish, several hooks in me
like prized scars. Love me by kissing my scars.
Love me on your hands and knees like a tatterdemalion
on a desert island scooping up a bottle with a message in it.
Let your love for me be uncharted, unchartable, off the charts.
Love me blind as justice. Love me blinder than a gigantic roosting bat,
satisfied with a thousand mosquitos in its stomach.
Love me as the upper rim of the sun appears above the horizon
as a result of the diurnal rotation of the earth. Love me
in golden afternoon light, in the darkness behind your eyelids
behind your sleep mask. Love me in every room in our house,
in every stanza of every poem you write.
Love me like I’m a bookmark holding your favorite page
in your favorite book. Love me like I’m a word
you just learned and can’t wait to use
such as cockshut which means twilight
or titivate which means to decorate.
Love me when I spill beer on the book I borrowed
from you and sheepishly return it. Love me until your love
for me makes the ceiling spin, makes you sweat cold,
makes you need to lie down, makes your head pound, until
you swear you’ll never love me this much ever again but then you do.
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This was gorgeous
Sometimes exaggeration is a writing strategy that works. This is fun and pretty great!
Such rich wordplay-but light. The title is great too! What is a “tatterdemalion?”
That title is perfection!
Gosh this is just wonderful.
this a keen keen
a sharp lamentation
of the desire
to be loved
love the tone, attitude and humor of this. The world needs more funny poems. Thank you
This poem’s funny?
The poem says I’m tired of life and feel like a mistake. I don’t get how people see humor in that.
I think it’s ironically funny. Black comedy? Is this incorrect?
I don’t know. I wasn’t laughing when I wrote it.
“Love me like I’m a bookmark holding your favorite page”
Brilliant!
Thanks!
I feel like a punching bag! Line after line just keep knocking me out. BTW, congratulations on your finalist status in the Accents contest!
Thanks Sylvia.
when I read the title, I figured that by itself would outdo the poem. I was wrong. So many, many good lines each of which is sufficient to evoke the feeling in the title. Great work.
What a great comment. Thanks Mike.
Love this too. Did not find it funny – if that reassures you. Found it pretty vulnerable and visceral and, well, gentlefirm. Yup. Good title. Sets it up well, by the scruff of the neck!
Thanks so much!