Love Poem
Love Poem
I lost a memory I had of you
as though it were an old password
to my heart.
I would start to write it
and stumble over the word,
the special character, the capitals.
It is easier to write daffodils,
poppies, Black Eyed Susan,
tulips, your lips, moist,
than it is to write the password
to feelings or that memory
of how much love
there was and above
all how much pain
there was
when you left
us.
I walk outside,
having a mind to write
a poem, but I feel rain
upon my skin.
The password
to your memory
was simply
rain.
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I love the simplicity of the password: rain
A gentle 4 letter word
Kim, sometimes simplicity is profound. Thanks for pointing that out to me.
Perfect. Love this!
Anastasia, what a suggestive and apt name you have for a poetess… Thanks for reading and commenting…
What a beautifully sad and true poem.
A sad and true poem, as you suggest, is one we often write to record our lives with words.
This is so beautiful. The misplaced memory…the magic of rain…
Thanks, Jane, for suggesting that beauty can be in the reader’s eye. I appreciate you for this reply.
I love the premise of this poem – how fitting!
Thank you so much, Nancy. I appreciate your comment.
It is easier to write daffodils,
poppies, Black Eyed Susan,
tulips, your lips, moist,
Lovely lines. It’s been wonderful to read your work again this year.
Sylvia, I have enjoyed your collection of poems this year. Keep on track with them.
I love the notion of a password to access a memory.
Thanks, Gaby, I forgot an old password yesterday and wrote the poem as soon as I came in from the rain.
When we really, really hurt it is always much easier to write of anything else. I have enjoyed your work so much.
K. and I have enjoyed your work and you comments. Keep writing and be safe.