Made Up of Bugs
To the hornet nest inside my head
you’re buzzing all about
the noisiness constricting me
and filling me with doubt
To the slimy worms inside my throat
you’re clogging up the pipes
and the words I want to say
don’t come out just right
And I’ve got a stomach bug
festering inside
he’s been poisoning me
for all of my life
And instead of butterflies
my heart is filled with crooked lies
implanted by the toxic plumes
of a caterpillar’s fumes
And to the moths inside my soul
eating each thread with no control
I ask to leave the part of me
that doesn’t want to die
To the ants that eat the parts of me
that no one’s gotten yet
if you’ll cherish what is left
I’ll be forever in your debt
And to the spider I swallow
once I am entirely hollow
be my Charlotte’s Web
and don’t spindle me with dread
Fix me up with pretty words
show me the worth of my own life
and eat up all the toxic bugs
who have filled me with strife
My hopes are in a spider
casting their net
trying to catch all the insects
that might become threats
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I like this one, AJ!
Interestingly parallel to Philip’s isn’t it?
*note: He’s apparently part of your PoMo Muse Queue Crew 😂 They always form. Follow it!*
The playfulness of form and rhyme work well, making this feel Shel Silverstein.
And I particularly like some of the choices for the bugs and their themes. The Moth hit me hard.
Huh? That’s interesting, “PoMo Muse crews” or people vibing off of other poems/poets they read naturally tend to form up. I guess I’ve just never seen anyone point it out, but you know what that’s a pretty cool phenomenon!
Thank you so much for the praise 🙂 I also really enjoy Philip’s poems! I didn’t know that PoMO Muse Crews were a thing honestly, but that’s really neat!
LexPoMo Muse Crew. New one for me too, but I totally get the concept!
This was a very creative poem. Felt very bouncy in the way you wrote many of the lines, and the way you plyed with rhyme schemes. Kept it fresh.
The ants are my favorite. That was a very unexpected turn there, being ‘forever in their debt.’ This was a fantastic piece!
Spiders are the story weavers and protectors, from myth and folklore. I thought this piece was a very good way of channeling that
Thank you! I really wanted the spider to shine as the savior, so thank you.