Makeshift
in a makeshift shelter
of pine needles and cedar boughs
i breathe in this one moment
the only moment i’m Alive
these trees have little use for my paltry mulch
the hibernating moles and voles loathe me
to them my intelligence is a passing vapor
no more real than the space and time
i try to define
even the stone that cuts
into my shoulder blade is contemptuous
of my hairsplitting soul
winter is when I wear layers of wool
and the forest goes naked and dances
in the wild wind of Polaris
and water changes its nature to become
solid with the stone and mocks my desire
to go with the flow
i’m stopped here
an unguarded lump of clay
unable to speed my heart’s slow tempo
Aware
of being unneeded
afraid to move
afraid all this life will stomp me out
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I love how you write about nature. This line: “winter is when I wear layers of wool/and the forest goes naked” is so awesome to me.
To my ear, “i breathe in this one moment / the only moment i’m Alive” and “my intelligence is a passing vapor / no more real than the space and time” feels Shakespearean: “Vows are but breath, and breath a vapor is / Then thou, fair sun, which on my Earth dost shine, / Exhal’st this vapor-vow; in thee it is. / If broken, then, it is no fault of mine.” Love’s Labor’s Lost
wow Gabby thanks
I hold a poor candle up to the bard
So many gorgeous lines:
“these trees have little use for my paltry mulch
the hibernating moles and voles loathe me”
“winter is when I wear layers of wool
and the forest goes naked and dances”
the earth still
moving with us
on her feet.
beautiful as always, Jim!
“an unguarded lump of clay” – wow, aren’t we all just makeshift beings? So lovely to read and enjoy the delicious moment.
Fabulous last line.
Agree with all the others- beautifully written.
This is just lovely.
Love the sound work–
“moles and voles loathe”
The closing works so powerfully on me. Thank you.