Making It Happen
On her final day as your babysitter,
Clotine took it upon herself to transform
our first apartment’s few appliances.
I remember as though I were standing
at that sink two decades ago, how she made
the faucet gleam and the stove shine.
Yesterday you discovered a pushbroom,
swept the garage, organized its contents,
and repurposed items I never knew we owned.
You bend your six-foot frame to inspect
the buds and shoots you coax out of our yard.
Each day you water and weed and admire.
You charm your cat, that fur ball
who snores softly on your chest,
with a selection of kibbles and catnip.
After Sunday dinner, you surprise us
with a zoom call with your sister, witness
to your birth twenty-four years ago.
As a present, you recite a favorite poem
by heart. Bring cookies back from the store.
Compliment me on a well-balanced meal.
You say you’re proud of me. Rightly so,
your sister once warned me against flattery.
I have been rendered to a beautiful shine.
9 thoughts on "Making It Happen"
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Beautiful poem! I felt like I was experiencing it too.
I would love to have met Clotine who left things better, and friendship and memories. What a gift.
Lovely. It is wonderful how the relationship is told to us through such simple and meaningful moments.
Great images Gaby!
There is nothing like approval and special attention from our children, who we love beyond anything else! This poem so eloquently expresses your delight! Just lovely!
Great honoring poem and I love the ending.
What’s better than praise from a child
Another wonderfully told story, Gaby.
Gaby, so beautiful constructed. The ending is stunning.