Martinis
By the end of July she was gone
Gone to visit old friends down south
Gone a month or more now
Calls to say she’s found more old friends
Up this holler or in that home
Must stay another day, another week
And then she finds others from another time
Her mother’s sister’s children’s nanny she might have said
Whom she must visit, so another day or so
“I’ll be be back Sunday”
But Sunday comes and there is mass at the old church
“Those who will be there may not ever be seen
Or heard from again in this life or time
Then I’ll get on the road”
But Sunday evening, a phone call
So I’m having a martini in the yard
Got another in the can
Hot damn, August Monday morning in the sun
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By the time she gets to Phoenix, you’ll be drinking, right? 😏 Seriously, a fine poem.
Love that line Kevin! Yes this poem creates quite a story!
I like this guy and how he handles things. Love the visit to mass, too.
She’ll be coming round the mountain when she comes. Yes, the poem builds a story and ends in humor. Will done.
Kevin, I hadn’t seen it that way. This character, identified here as “I”, is such a big hearted fool that he doesn’t see the painful loss coming his way. The martini is a serious misjudgment, a slap in the face to a warning sign. In today’s poem (Saturday, “A Scrap of a Script”) there he is again as “Person 1” exhibiting a stunning bit of naivety. And look back to “Quivering”; there he is with moon in his eyes. He’s about to take a fall. Stay tuned.
She’ll be coming round the mountain when she comes. Yes, the poem builds a story and ends in humor. Well done.