Memory
Memory I remember when my sister was born. I have never told her for I never thought to before. I will permit my poem to hold that memory of that morn-, ing, father, who had been at the hospital, hourly, waiting for her birth returned. My sister, brother, and I were on Cartwright mountain to stay the night if necessary, and it was, for mother labored long the way the earth is noncommittal to a seed’s need to burst from the soil, before its season to grow is come. Some six days ago, my sister’s toil got versed as poetry along dementia lines.
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I’m glad you are still keeping the memories alive. Love the comparison of birth and the “seeds need to burst from the soil.”
Sylvia, having been a farmer in my youth, I experienced birth early and also watched a large garden send forth new plants, a magical feat in the cycle of life. I appreciate your replies. Thanks…
This is so rich in emotion and beautifully written.
I wrote a reply to your comments, Nancy. I don’t know where it got posted. You rightly found my words to be full of emotion and even paid me the compliment that my words were beautifully written. I hope I can earn that praise in other works.
Beautiful for the love it shows. I like the specific of “Cartwright/ mountain.” I like how it begins by letting the reader in on something as yet untold. I like the old-time diction and syntax.
You found the love behind this poem. Cartwright Mountain was a place where my grandparents moved when they left the hollow near Lake Cumberland. I also had two aunts living there. Above the house where this poem was grounded was the second highest peak in Clinton County. I admit that my old time diction and syntax is also grounded in this place.
Nancy, you rightly understand the emotion behind this poem, and I like the fact that you find the words beautifully written. That is a compliment I hope I can earn again in my writing.
My reply magically appeared, Nance. Thank you again.