Moment #10
Heartbeat feverish
Yet tumescent drums suppressed
Otoscope needed
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Heartbeat feverish
Yet tumescent drums suppressed
Otoscope needed
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I’ve always appreciated when a poem teaches me a new word. ‘Tumescent’ is the word of the day for me.
Beyond that though, those word choices do a HUGE amount of storytelling here. It’s not uncommon to see comments on haikus saying much with little, but this really does take that to another level.