More Like Wolf and Wild Oregano
This heat clings, a wanting
child unmoved by ice cream
and too far flung from sleep.
Air serious as a red
bandana soaked in steam
and draped over our mouths.
This city balcony
no porch of sweet
tea and rocking chair.
Hill breezes cannot
find me among this maze
of stiffled brick and steel.
Some nights are like that:
The body’s red sweetness
in mismatched glasses,
wondering what star
will blaze our name,
what deep root
calls home the bloom.
8 thoughts on "More Like Wolf and Wild Oregano"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Your title is beautiful, and your imagery more so. Well done!
Thanks for the comments! I’ve been enjoying reading your work as well.
There are so many lines I love in this poem!I especially like the description of the balcony. Beautifully done!
Impressed by the way each stanza took me back to how the title plays in. Great piece.
The strength of this poem is undeniable… Great writing…
Love, love the first stanza! I can really feel the heat and stagnant air in this poem!
I think you need to find your way to my porch – there’s even a rocking chair!!
A wonderful read. How impressive that you can make such a strong impression of discomfort and at the same time have it sing. Very nice work. Just enough challenge to be continually surprising.
Nice! You made a funny comment on my poem, and I wondered what your work was like. Love your imagery and rhythm. We went straight from winter to summer didn’t we?