Morning Line
There’s an artist who lives on the street
behind me, a woman who paints the lawn
jockeys they sell at Keeneland.
Evenings, she works her magic on the patio,
leaves the statues to dry overnight.
At daybreak, I head outside for a run,
eager to survey whatever scene will unfold
before me – small men scattered
across the grass, standing on tables, posed
and frozen in various states of undress.
I like to imagine they’ve been partying
late into the night, like garden gnomes
who wait for darkness before they spring to life.
The mischievous glint in a ceramic eye
suggests they’ve been up to shenanigans.
A few of them face off, fists raised to fight
in a front-yard brawl. Others seem to shiver,
pale and ashamedly shirtless, their torsos
pasty, heads probably pounding, lucky
they’ve managed to find their breeches.
But a handful are well-rested, nattily dressed
in bright reds and blues, alert and ready to race.
They all stand at attention in one neat row,
chins up, arms lifted to herald the rising sun
which shines so bright on old Kentucky.
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small men scattered
across the grass, standing on tables, posed
and frozen in various states of undress.
a couple of days ago i was going to comment about your ‘dark side’ … so seeing ‘darkness’ buried in the center of this poem— forces my hand.. 🙂
even when your poems seem bright and sunny, i can often sense/see/feel a ‘darkness’ brewing/stirring/shifting somewhere below the surface.
reading your work this month has been a layered experience… is what i’m trying to say..
and… i’m curious to know if you’ve ever let yourself go…. ‘full-goth’ ?haha
Yes, I spent the past year, give or take, writing about a very dark period in my personal life and got pretty burnt out on it. I decided to take a break going into LexPoMo and write about any random thing that popped into my head…it has definitely been a mixed bag!
🙂 sounds like you might also be ready to try some bangs.
Haha, no bangs for me. It is years-old stuff but I dredged it all up — made for some of the best writing material I’ve ever had, so I had to use it.
I envy anyone who can jog in this heat. Enjoyed the immersion into the inner world of this statues, the imagination bug was strong with you. Delightful as always.
What Manny says. And the arms raised to herald the sun is gorgeous imagining.
I especially love the last two verses. Such great alliteration in that penultimate verse. I like how you lapse into the fantasy about the jockeys. It’s so visual!
This is wondrous: daybreak run past
a yard of partying garden gnomes.
Hallucinatory.
(P.S. there is some really good writing
on the racial undertones of the old
traditional lawn jockey in KY)
This is so imaginative and I love the way you end it.