Mosquito Bites
stop scratching
you tell the 5 year old,
think about something else
you know Gigi, I can think about
more than one thing at a time
she says
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stop scratching
you tell the 5 year old,
think about something else
you know Gigi, I can think about
more than one thing at a time
she says
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I love this!
What a humorous little poem. I can hear the kids response, and I imagine her still scratching as she says it.
Sure made me smile!
Of course she can- but should she? Your use of italic is so simple, but so appropriate here. That choice really emphasizes the tone between the two stanzas.
love the humor
Love the way her words, and the last line, put the speaker in his place. Nice wit, and true thought.
Touche, wise little five year old!