Mother Nature Rebelled
Rains gushed out
of the darkened sky
heavy in its pour, not
like the stream of a watering can,
not like the dousing of holy water,
the drip of a rotted hose.
The torrential drenching created
streams and creeks, angry rivers
cresting as the moon hung low,
moving beyond the
edge of comfort.
Downpours cascaded
as if the captains cried deep
tears of remorse,
submerging the earth
forcing rockslides, mudslides,
erasing roads to nowhere
creating sinkholes under the
floods.
Sins and sinners soaked in
the rebellious nature of the
downpour while others
prepared for
the change, the aftermath,
clouds promise to dissipate
with warmth, the earth
dries her wounds,
mothers scrub kitchen floors,
old soldiers find their way home,
writers and artists typeset
the skies with magical discourse,
the magnolia trees bloom
in unison.
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Yes, she has! Nice capture of that rebellion. and the ending is just yummy!!
Thank you.
writers and artists typesetthe skies with magical discourse,
the magnolia trees bloom
in unison.
What a wonderful ending for this lovely (and timely!) poem.
Thank you so much for sharing this poem!
Thank you for your kind words.
love the sound and rhythm in:
“the stream of a watering can,”
“the dousing of holy water,
“the drip of a rotted hose.”
Thank you. That part took me the longest to develop. I am happy it worked.
I love the image and sounds of:
“The torrential drenching created
streams and creeks, angry rivers
cresting as the moon hung low,”
Thank you. I love when sounds are able to be part of the images.
Richness of imagery and musicality abound when I read this poem out loud. Great writing!
I love that you read it out loud. Thank you so much for your kind words.
She an experiential of our submission to Mother’s Nature’s torrential rage . . .
not like the dousing of holy water jumped right out at me which I remember to be a flick of water one felt privileged, blessed beyond measure to receive
this poem really touched me, especially since it has been ever so dry out here in California . . . one can only remember and draw on memories of downpours on tropical islands great Baptismal piece, thank you!
Thank you so much for your kind assessment of my writing. It makes me happy that the poem was meaningful to you.