Mother Tongue
A doe rests after
her labor, while two
fawns teeter nearby. She
licks her young whenever
they bury their heads
into her stomach
to nurse, licks whatever
she can reach, which is
usually one of their
butts. She licks compulsively
across the animal kingdom,
this mother, licks birth
from the fur, licks
dirt from the eyes.
A mother laps at
a wound, saliva soothing
pain and clotting blood.
A mom licks her thumb
to clean dirty cheeks,
lay flat unruly hair.
When I was young,
my mom’s tongue swiped
ice cream from my cone
to protect my shirt
and, more likely, steal
something sweet for herself.
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love this.
This is the first time I’ve seen one of your poems in the wild! Anyway, I really like the poem transitioning from the fawn to you, and the comparisons are simple but lovely.
They do exist! I’m glad you found something to like
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Wow! That ending: “more likely, steal/something sweet for herself.”
Very nice, Kris. The turn is gently effective.
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Loved this poem’s development/unraveling. Beautifully thought out and crafted!
Fine craft, superb title, and wonderful plain language!
Usually compulsively unruly saliva whenever whatever.
The only words six words of 112 used with more than two syllables. There is a great lesson here for all poets. I’m equally impressed and envious.
I agree with others! The title is great! I love the “she licks compulsively / across the animal kingdom”