Mourning
Her habitual trapsing is solo now
except for those forced marches
when she tries to imitate intimacy
So too late for the early morning
avian rush when the deep woods
take on the vibrant tones
of a well supplied sanctuary
she ventures out after the sun
has burned off matin’s due
With this peak of unrestrained foliage
she feels dryness approach the world,
her simple attempt at an absent-minded
chat with herself begings with the same
dryness that seems to seep
down the curved slope of her spine
Still a crone of crows care enough
to caw and cause her an anoyance,
but soon she’s mocked only by silence
and the ebb of phiscal yearn,
lean into it she says
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When I read this poem, it gave me chills. Really like the line break at “down the curved slope of her spine”
You could be writing about my dear, departed grandmothers, Jim.
Jim, you always pull me right into your picture.
Rereading I see at least two typos:1) dew for due 2) begins for begings
Did you mean phiscal or physical?
It used to be a murder of crows, but it’s not anymore. A crone of crows – beautiful
Still a crone of crows care enough
to caw and cause her an anoyance,
but soon she’s mocked only by silence
and the ebb of phiscal yearn,
Wonderful!
Loved the visuals and the intangible feelings conjured by this one, Jim. Bravo!
Thanks steve. Agh! A third typo, of course “physical”
Wrote this hastily this morning
from notes I scribbled during a a walk in the woods. Jen & her crew were harvesting gooseberries so I didn’t ask her to proofread.
Ditto Melva’s words. I am late to the feast, but she said exactly what I would have said.
K. Bruce Florence
Love the crow lines, because I have a thing for crows. That last line gave me chills.
Lyrical, haunting, beautiful!
I like the image struck by “murder of crows” for that line. Enjoyed my read of several poems whose titles grabbed me…