My Friend’s Dad at the Funeral Visitation
I reach out to shake his hand,
but he says, I’ll take a hug,
so I let him squeeze
the life out of me. Time passes
while he clings, hurting human
full of need
for the music of still-moving blood,
the welcome sound
of any heartbeat’s thud, because
grief is a love song silenced
that leaves
an aching, empty ear.
18 thoughts on "My Friend’s Dad at the Funeral Visitation"
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The subtle, hushed rhymes in this are quiet and brilliant.
Very, very well crafted.
Thank you so much!
I like how you spaced (?) this poem, the line and stanza breaks. The music of still-moving blood and grief is a love song silenced, so true.
Thank you!
This is an amazing poem. The ending is so vivid, but also the line breaks and internal rhyme.
Thank you for your kind words!
This is so powerful, Chelsie. I can only echo what other’s say about the structure and craft — expertly handled. Lovely.
Thank you!
Woven beautifully, your stitch is a subtle, quiet thing only visible when the clouds move. Bravissima!
Thank you!
So moving, and well-executed!
I agree with others. A profound poem that says a lot with few words.
I think it’s a universal experience, the need for human connection in times of grief. Great poem, thanks for sharing!
Terrific ideas and sonics here. Love the rhyme of blood and thud. Great work.
Thanks!
love the freshness of “empty ear”
Wow. Love this, Chelsie. I can feel it happen.
Well done and I love the enjambment! I let him squeeze the life out of me!