My great-grandmother visited me the other night
My great-grandmother visited me the other night
I was upset
heartbroken
longing for days, I can no longer chase.
My fingers kept busy, folding clothes.
I could sense her
behind me
her perfume reeked: floral essence.
My tears continue sliding
silently
as my feet shuffle on—
to the other room.
I could feel her
beside me,
longing to hug me,
to comfort me.
I told her
“no, I’m fine” and “no, not right now”.
I wanted her to
go back and rest,
to move on without me.
She lingers
a little longer
—but eventually
she listens
and her spirit disappears.
3 thoughts on "My great-grandmother visited me the other night"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Beautifully sentimental. An emotional tug with “longing for days, I can no longer chase.”
The form is wonderful— it adds to the lovely flow of sound and images.
Ahhh, yes….
” longing for days, I can no longer chase.”
A haunting piece. That final image has a resonant weight.