My Sister’s Ex
You brought home from college that boy with the long
hair and beard who was high day to night, cooler than cool,
jamming to Layla on the FM in his avocado green Fiat,
driving back from Lexington rolling joints while steering
with his knees: the road rushing past the little window
in back where I sit with Ace, the coal black lab, growing
older than my twelve years with each mellow mile we make,
taking our time because that’s what we have coming
out of our pockets, time and a couple of dime bags scored
from his friend who grows the weed on an unmapped
plot of state forest land. When you end it with him
it breaks my heart. Where he is now, anyone’s guess,
but he lives on in the wind-borne scent from a group of teens
in the mall parking lot smoking a j and laughing,
in burning engine oil and the slow drift over hump-backed hills,
in sly grins and shared secrets, in glorious rock ’n roll.
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Great details move this poem – I feel the wind in my hair 🙂
Like Marta, I’m struck with how precisely the details conjure a time and place
Wonderful! It does capture a time and place, as well as parallel odors in the present. Very good!
he lives among
the stuff of myth
and legend..
You did great with this from yesterday…I did not have so much luck! I really love the last couplet.
“but he lives on in the wind-borne scent from a group of teens
in the mall parking lot smoking a j and laughing,”
I really like how you’ve immortalized him in this line and the poem in general, very cool
Delightful. Surprising weight amid the humor—an affection tinged with loss.
Love the memory and specificity!
Rock on 🤘!!! Nice work!
I love the sense of freedom you invoke. The 1970’s-specfic details like avocado green Fiat, dime bags and smoking a ‘j add so much character and authenticity.
Your specific images really evoke the scene perfectly and draw NE right in
This is why you are a great poet, Bill. Your memory is meticulous and vivid. Plus, you feel your memory. Some of us can only struggle to remember. Period.
I loved hearing most of this in our gauntlet meet last weekend and was happy to find it here. So many evocative details that render relatable emotions.