My Words for You
My Words for you
will stand silent
on the page
once they are born.
They will not
grow to hate
love nor
diminish you.
In them,
you may love me
(as you promised)
forever.
In them,
my 92 year
old uncle
will catch trout
when all those,
fishing beside
him in the same clear,
cold flowing stream,
catch not even one,
having not yet learned
what it is like to dream–
to live life to the fullest,
loving those moments
that tug gently
on a heart’s
line.
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Love the sense of wonder here
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate your reply…
“Other-world”ly….. magical!
Thanks for find the magic of the words….
This poem feels like whole lives spinning on a canvas of satiated wild. I love it!
Thank you Violett. Your response picks up on the lives and how fast lives move from the time they begin. And you are also true about how wild that journey can be.
the last lines sing an amen to the powerful story told above them.
Then I have done the job of a poet with this story poem. Thank you…
What a lovely image of the wisdom borne of years.
The image you quote is the wisdom of my uncle. Thanks, indeed…
deft hand with the fishing metaphor
You caught me… guilt as charged…
A Cento using lines from your poem. http://lexpomo.com/poem/talking-with-the-dead-a-cento/
Thanks, Pauletta, I have read it. Nice cento…