myth of nations
carcasses stacked high this side of the Rio Grande
to form a wall of rotted onyx meant to dissuade
all human aspiration: the flies are all that want
them now not even their own nations willing
to serve them as lord of hosts we know nothing
the old traditions: to break bread with brethren
unknown, strangers we’ll call them names
we give them call them what we wish because
then it’s easier to let them die let them
be savaged it is easier this way for everyone
to give them new names better still, numbers
sometimes it’s just hard to call them what they want
use their names, their language it is better
to split them apart // split them apart // split them apart
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“we know nothing
the old traditions: to break bread with brethren
unknown, strangers we’ll call them names
we give them call them what we wish because
“then it’s easier to let them die let them
be savaged it is easier this way for everyone
to give them new names better still, numbers”
Haunting; this shakes me to my core.
This poem masterfully weaves the painful history of the southern borderlands and the disturbing contemporary struggles of those who are persecuted along them.
Thank you. I’m glad that (somehow) the intent of the poem came across. I always worry about that kind of thing.
Your message was loud, clear, and beyond accurate! Beautiful. Powerful. Purposeful. Well done!
Very effective poem! I keep rereading it. That’s a good sign.
The spaces lend themselves to rereading, I think. Glad you enjoyed it! Happy accidents at 1 AM are nice, puzzling, and frustrating at times.
The spaces 1) give me time to take in a phrase before moving on, and 2) graphically convey the lack of connection
Thanks for that insight. Unfortunately form is never purposeful for me, and it usually more to do with visual aesthetics. And I’ve been accused of making poems with odd shapes for no good reason–glad it has some value here!