Narrow Gate
ego squeezes can’t
pass drop pack weigh worth suck gut
still stuck til breath comes
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ego squeezes can’t
pass drop pack weigh worth suck gut
still stuck til breath comes
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Oh, breath is powerful stuff!
I like this!
staccato, one-sylable
shots in the Battle of the Ego
like the haiku-we can bloat in the middle
Love this observation!
Agree!
I resemble this poem.
Great imagery!
Thanks all!