Nature’s Way
Her death no surprise in some way.
A china doll of porcelain bones,
she ate a few bites of lettuce
and called it lunch. No amount
of coiffing her carefully colored
hair could hide her fragility.
You knew one fall would shatter
her. I feared for her aging body
and for my own.
Sometimes I wonder if car crashes
are just nature’s way to purge people
on their way out anyway,
like a big cat waiting for the slowest
antelope, the weakened ready
to be taken. We choose, in some way,
don’t we, our deaths? It would take
only a slight swerve of the wheel.
13 thoughts on "Nature’s Way"
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lots to chew on here
You have a beautiful way of writing out these complex contemplations. Thanks.
Thank you so much!
What a complex poem. That thought, “We choose, in some way,/don’t we, our deaths?” will sit with me.
Shaun, the ultimate compliment!
really appreciated these images-
china doll of porcelain bones
a few bites of lettuce
big cat waiting for the slowest antelope
Awesome, Pat! I will be thinking about this poem all day!
Sylvia, what a nice compliment!
Wonderful, powerful poem! The last stanza really grabs with its big cat image.
Thanks Geri, an image from safari
Powerful ending!
A really fine poem that leaves me deeply depressed. Do we, in a way, choose our own deaths? Only if we choose “to swerve.” Quite provocative.
It comes not so much from rational intention as a deep inner knowing and intuition