Naught Be All Else To Me
Car parts among oil cans
Old telephone cable spools
turned picnic tables
where we shot the moon
If your eyes glance away
I see it, looking at your watch
Am I speaking too long, too fast
Not fast enough
The wind comes in
from the southwest
Black angus in a field of buttercups
Poke berries in a dry rot tire
My sister says I’ll listen
to you honey but she’s not the one
whose notice I want
cradle hand, queen mother, her.
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Ate as usual
I take in a lot when I read this. Neglect, awareness, sensitivity, movement, change, longing, and desire. Thanks for the experience!
Hello! I love how the images in this really contribute to the tone! It feels lonely and forgotten, like the speaker.
I love how you surround the longing and craving with physical details, a sense of place. I love “poke berries in a dry rot tire.” I feel akin to this poem.
You have set a very powerful scene in this poem. There is so much that is discarded, yet something big is desired, too. Thanks for sharing.
“Naught”
I relate to the hyperawareness of self you convey here.
(A blessing and a curse as I see it). Your setting details are beautifully described, flowing with ease.
Good to read your work, Liz!
Love this theme that you’ve been mining, Liz. Looking forward to reading more!
The last stanza is its own compressed narrative. Chef’s kiss!
I’ve missed your words!
Car parts and old oil cans-
the scene creates the tone.
Perfect
Nice imagery and I feel like I know this place. There is a history here, wanting more and getting less.